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PostSubject: Random untitled conversation...   Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:50 pm

Thought I might post this. Enjoy!

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Why did you leave? Didn't you love me? Didn't you want to stay with me?

I wanted nothing more than to stay with you, and love you, and to live. But he called me away, and who can resist him?

But why didn't you fight? If you had really tried, you could have stayed.

I did try, as hard as I could. But it wasn't enough...

You mean you didn't really want to stay with me, that's what.

No, no, you're wrong. I wanted so much to stay with you.

But you didn't...and now I'm all alone.

I'm sorry...but I'll always be here, in this place, for you.

Why can't I just stay here forever?

Because you have a life to live. You can't waste it. Don't waste it like I did, until it was too late.

You didn't waste it. It was taken away from you. He took it away. It's his fault.

Oh, no, dear one. He took it, but I'm the one who gave it.

Why did you give it?

I was so tired...I just wanted some rest.

You can rest here!

No, I couldn't have...not the kind of rest I needed. And it's so beautiful here, it's just what I needed.

It's beautiful here too...

Yes, it is, but it's a different kind of beautiful here...

Please come back...just for a while?

Oh, how I long to...but I can't...

I'll miss you.

I know...I'll miss you too.

Will I ever see you again?

Yes...someday.

When?

Someday...someday soon.

Wait for me then!

I will...


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So...comments and constructive criticism are always welcome; I hope you all liked it.
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PostSubject: Re: Random untitled conversation...   Thu Aug 28, 2008 5:24 pm

I love it Ty! I'm not the a good critic though. XP

The conversation is so sad and deep, you know?

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PostSubject: Re: Random untitled conversation...   Mon Sep 01, 2008 8:51 pm

Thank you, Lighty!

Yeah, it is...I suppose it's when I was mourning something...and I'm not entirely sure who the 'he' is. I suppose you could say it's God; but yeah.

Thanks for reading this!
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PostSubject: Re: Random untitled conversation...   Thu Oct 02, 2008 7:36 pm

It sounds like something out of Twilight. It's really good. Was this really random?
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